Soluzione del esercizio 4 di Performer B2 - Student's Book
Esercizi svolti per il libro Performer B2 - Student's Book
Soluzione
Story A does a better job than Story B with the strategies provided.
Story A has a clear beginning, middle, and end, while Story B is all over the place.
Story A sticks to a clear topic – Elise's long run – and includes all the important details. Story B doesn't have a clear focus and lacks essential details.
Story A gives us lots of details about Elise and her journey, using past tense consistently. Story B doesn't give us much to go on about the character and doesn't use tense well.
Story A keeps us interested with vivid descriptions and varied language. Story B is a bit boring and doesn't use descriptive language effectively.
Overall, Story A is more in line with what the strategies suggest: a well-structured story with clear planning, a logical sequence, detailed characters, and engaging language.